The Doorway

Pet
Prayonghom
Genre: 
Young Adult

CNF:  Reviewer could not finish reading the story because of excessive head hopping and the use of metaphors. It led to confusion as to whose point of view the reviewer was reading while the numerous metaphors detracted one from the story. It is suggested that the dictum "less is more" be used, even in writing and crafting stories.

 

M.P. Ceja/Penelope Bartotto